In my pastiche, most of the events happen in Winter or Spring. My rewrite will start out by describing the characters. Then it will go on with what the characters do everyday. For example Neve and Encarnado help their mother all the time. They go fishing, they clean and help cook as well. It will show how they sleep in the woods where they are safe. Then it will start out in the Winter where Neve helps her mom build a fire every day. Then the bear will come knocking at the door, and they will let him in. Every day of the winter the bear will come and lay by the fire and the girls will play with him.
Then comes Spring, then come Summer where the bear goes off to do what he needs to. Then a couple of days later the girls find the dwarf (Cobra-Encantada) which they help because they are so nice. Then they go along with helping their mother everyday like always, and a few days later they run across the Cobra-Encantada again and help it out of its situation. The Cobra-Encantada is still mean and rude but it doesn't stop the girls. But when they incounter the Cobra-Encantada a third time, they see it get murdered by the bear, so they scream and run away, but they here the bear call after them so they stop and as he appoaches them, he is no longer a bear he is a Prince. Later he introduces Encarnado to his brother, and they get married a long with Neve and Prince Davi. But before they get married their is a carnival for the celebration of Prince Davi's return.
I haven't figured out every little detail of what will happen through out my pastiche but I am still thinking. Can anyone please give me some ideas! I would really appreciate it!
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